Black Dog


 By Jimmy D.


One Evening, on a dark and stormy night, there were four girls..2 parents..and one street..these four girls were having a sleep over, and the parents were downstairs. "Girls, were going out to the store, we'll be back in about an hour!" yelled one of the girls mother up the stairs.

So the girls said goodbye and went back upstairs. About 10 minutes later, they heard a noise outside the back door..it was a scratching sound. One of the girls said "Hey, What's that noise? Wanna go check it out?" So, They went downstairs and opened the back door..it was a small black puppy, and it ran in and shook with the cool nighttime air. "Awwwww.. It's SO CUTE!" said One girl. Everyone else agreed, all petting it softly. Just then, one girl looked behind her, and saw a shadow being cast by the smooth light of the moon, it looked as if it were a person's shadow. She looked and opened her mouth to say what she saw, but when they looked back, nothing was there. "It was probably just your imagination, tricking your mind." said one girl, with a bit of fright in her voice.

They all agreed and went back upstairs after feeding the puppy some ham. They were playing around with the dog when the dog ran out of the room. They looked and looked but couldn't find this mysterious dog, so, sadly, they sat back down in the room they were sleeping in.

Then, one girl had to go to the bathroom. Leaving the room, she heard a quiet bark..coming from the attic. "Now how did the dog get in there?" she asked herself quietly. she slowly walked in the dim light of the narrow hallway to the attic stairs..As this was hapening, the girls were talking, when they heard a loud scream. They ran out and saw their friend go flying out of the attic door, landing in front of them. They all screamed at this, but the girl was ok, they assumed that it was the dog that scared here, but she kept saying something about a man..in a dark hooded cloak, pushing her off the staircase. Everyone thought she was just kidding, so they continued on with their sleepover.

But then, they remembered the dog, and how it was up in the attic. They all raced up to the dark and gloomy crawlspace of the attic, boxes were piled up high on top and beside each other, they saw the dog, but heard a man talking, he seemed to be whispering to himself.."death is mine, death is mine"..They screamed and ran downstairs.

One grabbed the phone to call the police, but just as they did that, the girl with the phone ran downstairs, remembering not to call the police unless she was sure of what was happening. So she checked the door to see if it was unlocked..it wasn't. So she was at the bottom of the stairs, the other girls waiting in the room they were sleping in, when the phone rang. The girl at the bottom of the stairs ran upstairs and was in the bathroom, and she answered it.. it said.. "Look in the shower..there's a surprise"..she hung up, but curious, looked in the shower.

All of a sudden a man jumped out and slit her throat, and then licked up the blood that had been drawn from her neck. But before she died she had enough time to scream, and the other girls heard it. They rushed into the bathroom. The man had vanished. They saw the blood and their dead friend and screamed. They ran to the phone. It was dead. There was a note,It read: The phone is dead, your friend is dead, what does it mean?.. just then they heard a loud bang and heard someone singing softly: "My name is, Loomar and i'm on the street called boomar, going to kill the whole town, give the world a big frown.."

They got really scared and ran into the basement. Sadly that's where he was.. he brutaly murdered the last three girls, and went back into the attic, waiting.. and to think, those girls were the idiots who let him in..he was a shapeshifter, gone crazy.. but his fun wasn't over...there was still a whole town and street waiting just for him

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